This book is about my experience on going to THE MOST SCARIEST RIDE ever! You can tell by the title, my book is about me getting freaked out on the Space Mountain Roller coaster. This time, I made this story without Ms. C's comments and mini lessons so I hope you enjoy reading this story!
That was a fantastic story of you overcoming your fear. You really described your story very well. I could get a really clear picture in my head, and the photo was a funny touch that was fun to read. The showing-not-telling was also quite good as well as the stunning internal feelings. I know that anyone who reads this would be hooked on to it. Great job Vainavi!
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