I can definitely see the change! The first thing I noticed, was that my word choice, and description was much better in my Personal Narrative. I feel much better using inner thinking, and taking my heart, and stretching it. It was a bit hard figuring out how to start my PN and how to end it. Otherwise, I was really surprised to see my progress, and I really thought that mini lessons and partner feedback really enhanced my thinking. These techniques made me think deeper on how I can make my heart shine throughout the story. In my On Demand writing though, I noticed more dialogue than in my recent Personal Narrative, but my Personal Narrative didn't have as much, so that's something I can work on. I'm really impressed with the development of my writing, and I would love to it grow throughout the year as well!
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